no, i don't know french. i promise. it is le truth.
i'm noticing a general trend. people generally agree that subtext isn't good enough so as to actually get the secret across, the two act like little kids, and the court case should just match up with the situation!
so. i'm editing now.
spoilers!
i think i edited it well enough so that if you didn't figure out the secret, you'd figure it out. like i basically whacked err'body over the head with it at the end in the new version.
it doesn't end happy anymore. so to all of those who wanted a happy ending, sorry. too bad.
dialogue should be fixed up. i don't know how to talk like an adult. sorry.
the court case, my goodness. the most important part of the edits. it's gonna be a divorce now. which is kinda screwy for me since i definitely don't know how they go, but since it's not important to the whole story really... okay, yeah, fine, you get a bad court case. sorry! :)
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